Honest Opinions on a poem by my Late Great Father!! (R.J.Luce)?

-------------OUR PURPOSE------------------------We must all do what we can----------------------To end Man"s inhumanity to man.----------------Towards each other we simply must,------------Stop being cruel,unkind and unjust.---------------------------------… creator did not place us here,---------------To,of a brother,live in fear.------------------------This is not the purpose he had in mind,----------For You,or I,or all of Mankind.--------------------------------… must,soon,correct the error of our ways---Ere he shortens the number of our Days.-------We were not put here to make war and strife-We"re her to lead a much saner life.